Oh, how I regret my pantser days…

Hi, my name is Susie and I’m a recovering pantser. It’s been three and a half years since my last transgression.

And I’m still paying for it…

When I first began to think seriously about trying to get published, I started reading blogs dedicated to the craft of writing. I soon found that one topic writers often like to talk about is that of the PLOTTER versus the PANTSER. If you type those terms into your search bar, you will get tons of articles on the subject.

So what’s it all about? A plotter is someone who plans out their book before they start writing while a pantser is a person who ‘flies by the seat of their pants’ or, in other words, wings it.

Pantser

I started out life as a pantser. Whenever I set pen to paper, my thoughts went along the lines of: “Ooh, I want to write about this character and that character and now I’ll have them meeting here and now I’ll have them saying this and I’m not sure where it’s all heading but it’s magnificent fun, tra la la!”

Teenage me filled notebooks with the disorganised ramblings that ended up forming the basis of my historical fiction series, leaving current me (ahem, a decade or so beyond my teens) to shudder and cry, “Why, for the love of God, why?!”

Don’t get me wrong, I’ve nothing against the concept in general – it’s a great way to get the juices flowing and I think it’s ideal for exploring your creativity. However, I do not believe it constitutes the best approach to writing the novels that you one day would like to get published.

Because a novel is a carefully crafted thing. It doesn’t just spring off the page ready-made. You can’t be a pantser and expect to come up with a comprehensible storyline on the first draft. In my experience, a pantser will include a character and then forget about them halfway through. A pantser will realise they need an essential person/device for their climactic moment which they have failed to introduce in an earlier part of the novel. A pantser will be inconsistent with physical characteristics, characters’ ages, the passage of time, etc. Continuity is a term unknown to the pantser.

What’s the big deal, you say? Just sort it out in the edit. Well, that’s grand, except for the fact that editing such a messy monstrosity becomes a HUGE job, and the poor pantser will have to tease out all the details and rework entire scenes and character arcs to make the whole thing coherent.

Wouldn’t it have been so much easier to plot it out first?

Plotter

I am 100% converted to being a plotter. I now approach a new book by first writing a general outline of it, which is basically a series of bullet points describing the Big Picture. I can swap the points around and juggle the different parts of the story until I’m happy I’ve got an overall view of it from start to finish.

Then I do a detailed outline where I write out scene by scene what is going to happen. This forces me to flesh out the details which I left vague in the general outline, as well as pinpoint where the major scenes occur and where transitional scenes are needed to create a smooth flow to the story.

After that, I make a timeline, noting exactly when the various events in the book take place and what ages the characters are at those points.

Only then can I begin working on the manuscript. The outlines aren’t rigid and are open to change if, in the course of the actual writing, new inspiration hits, but they provide a life ring that keeps me afloat as I glide down the River of Continuity (instead of being sucked into the Makes-No-Sense White Water Rapids).

Regrettably, that ship has sailed for the books I’ve already written. Because I never planned them out fully before I started, I didn’t have the plot set in my head. Now that I’ve had time to reflect and come up with a better version of the story, I am obliged to go back and alter them to fit. Which requires a tremendous amount of editing.

And that’s how I’ve been spending my summer.

I must emphasise that this is only my own opinion – many pantsers swear by their approach and I say good for them!

But I can guarantee you I will never fall off this wagon. Susie Murphy: plotter for life.

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6 thoughts on “Oh, how I regret my pantser days…

  1. Grace Hennessy says:

    I have a vague memory of reading an interview with Philip Pullman once, where someone asked him how he starts writing a new book, and he said he gets a huge sheet of paper and writes out all sorts of ideas, storylines, characters and scenes etc. on post-its, and sticks them onto the paper and rearranges them until they’re in the order he likes best and he has the whole thing planned to a T…. then he starts writing and chucks the plan out the window!

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    • Susie Murphy says:

      Ha ha, but at least he had a plan first! Never mind that he didn’t stick with it… πŸ˜‰ Sometimes the characters will pull you in a direction you don’t expect and, if that happens, you have to just go with it. But I think it’s easier to have a plan and break from it than to have no plan at all!

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  2. JJAzar says:

    Hi Susie! Crazy how I stumbled across your blog. I just fired up a WordPress blog myself, and I too am working on writing a book to publish! (just subscribed. We’re all in this together!) This is an interesting point of view you offer. I think the reason why many neglect plot initially is because plot isn’t necessarily charming. Characters and dialogue and interaction and bits are charming in the author’s mind, and that’s what comes out onto the page. I am certainly guilty of neglecting plot at times, but editing is a beautiful thing, and bolstering the plot is essential during that process.

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    • Susie Murphy says:

      Welcome to the blogosphere, J.J.! I think you’re right about that, it’s very easy to get distracted by other things along the way and often it’s only afterwards that it becomes clear where the plot points are needed to pull the seams together. Hope you have a smooth path as you write your own book!

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